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So, I just want to confirm a few things:
1) Adele got lost, right? Her house didn't disappear?
2) She's looking for a bathroom, because she drank two sodas. (I liked that addition to her bio, btw, about the strawberry soda. That was just plain funny.)
And I adisagree about the first panel; I think her face looks just right, actually. At the worst, the shoulder might be a little uneven. But other than that, it looks good.
And I think I understand things much better now. I wasn't paying complete attention on the first page, but going back noticed that the green dude was following her. So that made more sense.
The panel where she COMPLETELY blanked him out and was arguing w/ Aerum about what type of creature he was was HILARIOUS. I also find it awesome that she joins the race purely so that she can use the bathroom (although I suppose I should read the last page to be sure.) Excellent job on this page as a whole!
1) Adele got lost, right? Her house didn't disappear?
2) She's looking for a bathroom, because she drank two sodas. (I liked that addition to her bio, btw, about the strawberry soda. That was just plain funny.)
And I adisagree about the first panel; I think her face looks just right, actually. At the worst, the shoulder might be a little uneven. But other than that, it looks good.
And I think I understand things much better now. I wasn't paying complete attention on the first page, but going back noticed that the green dude was following her. So that made more sense.
The panel where she COMPLETELY blanked him out and was arguing w/ Aerum about what type of creature he was was HILARIOUS. I also find it awesome that she joins the race purely so that she can use the bathroom (although I suppose I should read the last page to be sure.) Excellent job on this page as a whole!
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